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Comment on What do you think so far? by NekoBus

NekoBus — Sun, 24 Oct 2010 23:34:51 +0000

Well the content is not bad, but I agree with the first answer. You do need to work on your grammar and spelling. Read and reread what you’ve written until it flows the way you want and you’re satisfied with it.

A few places are wonky, or off. I like what you mean by time painfully passed, but you could be more descriptive. Get into her head, what’s she thinking and feeling here? Those are the things that will bring the characters to life and give them more dimensions. Then I’m not sure what you mean by “Waiting had felt horrible ever since it happened. Waiting to die, the time had seemed to drag on and on.” Since what happened? Don’t leave the reader hanging – I see you’re hinting at it toward the end, but if you bring it up, follow through with something. Then it sounds like she has a terminal illness.

I like the descriptions of the teacher. No need to say Sterling is a teenager, if it’s in a high school, that’s just stating the obvious. How many occupants are there besides Astra? I don’t think you need to put exclamation points at the end of what the teacher says. Anyway, it’s got potential, just keep working on it until you’re satisfied.

Good luck!

Comment on What do you think so far? by ●ßeautiful Ŋightmare● ｡(◕‿◕)｡

●ßeautiful Ŋightmare● ｡(◕‿◕)｡ — Sun, 24 Oct 2010 23:22:57 +0000

“She brought her knees in closer and tried to tu ne out the fact that the floor was so hard she was losing feeling in her butt” Sounds a little weird. Just mentioning she was getting increasingly uncomfortable would be enough. =)

The rest of it needs tweaking in bits, like add more detail so we know how the character is feeling. Last of all, the very end is weird… It is strange for her arms to be aching while she is reminiscing, so maybe leave that out or change it.

Comment on What do you think so far? by Lutopu L

Lutopu L — Sun, 24 Oct 2010 23:15:03 +0000

didn’t read it… got turned off when you said you didn’t like how it flowed. it’s your baby, you can make it how you want, if you don’t like it, what are the chances anyone else will???

Comment on What do you think so far? by Chibi Kitteh

Chibi Kitteh — Sun, 24 Oct 2010 22:24:07 +0000

It sounds super good! I really want to read it! You have some grammatical errors, like grown should be groan, just to name one. It is a really good story and I am interested in reading it when it is done! Good Luck!

Comment on Q&A: Can I use one of those power converters you plug into the car to recharge the battery for my mobility scooter? by abnormalmale

abnormalmale — Sat, 23 Oct 2010 22:52:52 +0000

you can safely charge your scooter’s battery using this converter, the only problem is that you cannot leave the converter connected to your car battery permanently; these converters consume electricity from the car battery, and they tend to heat alot, even when no power is consumed from the other side of the converter(the 110 or 220 vAC output), you dont wanna end with an empty car battery nor a damaged converter.

Comment on Q&A: Can I use one of those power converters you plug into the car to recharge the battery for my mobility scooter? by Eva

Eva — Sat, 23 Oct 2010 22:51:31 +0000

It all depends on the power ratings that your scooter needs and the ratings of the converter in your car. If the two match then you should be ok.

But before doing anything check all available documentation and talk with your scooter’s user support.

It is also possible that you might be able to get a charger from the scooter manufacturer that is compatible with your car.

Comment on Q&A: Can I use one of those power converters you plug into the car to recharge the battery for my mobility scooter? by sparky3489

sparky3489 — Sat, 23 Oct 2010 22:16:54 +0000

Sure, but then whats going to keep the car battery charged?

Comment on Drive Medical Single Fold Suitcase Style Wheelchair – Scooter Ramps with Carry Bag, Gun Metal, 3′ x 30″ Reviews by paul harte

paul harte — Wed, 20 Oct 2010 21:41:29 +0000

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Comment on WheelChair Back Flip by larbacmc1

larbacmc1 — Tue, 19 Oct 2010 23:25:41 +0000

@x3rikku you say it is as old as a VHS,
that is o.k. as long as this wheeechair is
a good wheelchair for a person who can’t
walk anymore.

Comment on WheelChair Back Flip by larbacmc1

larbacmc1 — Tue, 19 Oct 2010 23:04:28 +0000

People laugh at the old ad, all I want to know is ,
is this hoveround power chair a goood wheelchair
for a person with pain and back problems and
finds it too painfull to walk.